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:::untitled::: by ~DragonsDesire:iconDragonsDesire:





Hearing screams in the next room
I hide from your towering shadow
You just wont try to love me
Colder my hreat grows...I'm hallow

If i sleep just a dream of you,
I'll wake wothout you there
I'm all alone
with my ripped and shreadded bear

Pleading for help byond the door
But my arms pinned to the ground
Barely consiounse, I cry to god.
my arms burn from this tight bound

I see your smile lead me away,
fronm this pain I feel,
But its only temporary,
pain too deep to heal

My shedded tears fall to cold hands
shaking as I see my past
Playing before my eyes
Body bounded by an invisible cast

No one could have helped
wasnt some one missing me?
Nothing could be done....
when will this false dream cease to be?

sinking deep into this unimportant abyss....
watching as people all around sing the elegies,
eligies of who we were....
cant get in the door...I lost my keys.

Just go, and let me fall queitly.
Let my fire die , let my spirit fly, and start wandering
yearning to be loved...
I was the sacrifice for your happy ending.
©2004-2008 ~DragonsDesire
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Submitted: Dec 3, 2004
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Things have been a bit heavy latly.....I was in a typing mode and decided to try and write...Its really randome, I know....but its about two men who changed my life foever....one of them....I loved...the other..........long story...but tell me what you think...I know spelling might suck....but let me know what you think

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~gothic4ever:icongothic4ever: Dec 3, 2004, 5:09:09 PM
woow very nice!!! congrats!!!
~DragonsDesire:iconDragonsDesire: Dec 3, 2004, 6:34:07 PM
really...I think It sucks
~gothic4ever:icongothic4ever: Dec 4, 2004, 8:25:18 AM
well but for me itīs cool!! really... sucks but cool!!!
~DragonessDeanna:iconDragonessDeanna: Dec 5, 2004, 8:53:50 PM
oh! reading this made me want to hug you!! >.< :glomp:

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"Erik is not truly dead. He lives on within the souls of those who choose to listen to the music of the night."
-DragonessDeanna

"The name's Madame Morgan." - Personal Quote
~britty-chan:iconbritty-chan: Dec 6, 2004, 3:42:19 PM
Nice, liked the ending. Were you listening to Missing when you wrote this?
~britty-chan:iconbritty-chan: Dec 6, 2004, 5:38:20 PM
Yeah, the song Missing by Evanescence. There are a few lines in the poem that really remind me of the song.
~CelticKitten727:iconCelticKitten727: Dec 14, 2004, 6:25:57 PM
I really like the end to this. the last paragraph is priceless; esp the last line...love it. god, I wish I could help you, but I wouldn't even, well, I DON'T even know where to start....sorry, I wish I could be there for you Day when things get really crappy, but things have gotten so far from reach now, I don't know what to do anymore....

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Cold Winter Death, take me now, for my love for this boy will never leave my tattered heart at peace...
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When I die, I either want to die knowing that the man I love loves me back, or I want to die alone...